Rainbow Dash attacks

[Skorpen]

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Nacht.

[Kirara]

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[Lena300]

-2949
Guten Morgen. ^_^

[Kirara]

-2950
Tach....

[Lena300]

-2951
Nicht so gut gelaunt? Oder wie soll man die Punkte deuten?

[Kirara]

-2952
Bin schlecht gelaunt...hab nich genug geschlafen

[Lena300]

-2953
Gut zu wissen.

[Kirara]

-2954

Also ich finds uninteressanr

[Lena300]

-2955

[Kirara]

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[Lena300]

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[Kirara]

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[Azuratis]

-2959

"na dann hoffe ich mal das du jetzt schlafst. wenn nicht? Azuratis hat gerade eine der kürzesten Fan-Fiction geschieben, ich je gesehen habe."

[Kirara]

-2960

Echt ?wie kurz denn?

[Azuratis]

-2961

Wäre sowieso nett, wenn jemand die Rechtschreibfehler korrigiert

Fan-Fiction (Öffnen)

Lost in Motion

This is not only the first fan-fiction that I write directly in english. It's also the shortest i've ever tried to write.

A light blue Pegasus with an rainbow colored mane was flying by. Each swipe of her wings with such an elegance that there was no word for it, that I would know. It wasn't just perfection, it was like the swipe was a how little world. Every muscle in her wing moving like it was controlled by some kind of holy string.
One of the muscles began to pull up the wing. The movement started at the back of her and wandered through each feather. They were vibrating like the stings of a harp playing a perfect symphony. An Orchestra started ro play in my mind.
The next muscle began to move. The wind began to play, the wing wandered forward. The melody in my head became much more complex, much more harder to understand. How could this even be. To find this amount of perfection, of harmony in a simple flap.
The last movement was going to be initialized. An gigant amount of muscles were now moving. Moving as perfect as the gear in a clockwork. My hear began to race. I was lost. Lost in the Motion of this Pegasus. My whole body was heating up. The wing began to move for his last and final swipe. The Orchestra was playing with such a volume. My ears were hurting, my body began to shake. The wing was now finally moving down. This little world, a wold of perfection and happiness. It now had found his end and left the space for a new one.
It was along time ago, that I had seen this. But now you know, why I not only want to be a member of the Wonderbolts. I want that others can see the perfection that I was allowed to see.

THE END

[Kirara]

-2962

schön geschrieben Azu
Ich würds gerne korrigieren aber ich kann nich an meinen Pc

[Azuratis]

-2963

habe gerade noch etwas mit autokorrektur gearbeitet.
"swipe" hat aber viele Bedeutungen aber schlagen, durchziehen und wischen beschreiben die bewegung ja auch sehr gut.

[Kirara]

-2964

Ja dass Swipe viele Bedeutungen weiß ich aber man muss den Satzzusammenhang beachten um die richtige Bedeutung zu finden

[Azuratis]

-2965

Hier noch mal der Link, das Passwort lautet: test

[Kirara]

-2966

Hmm komm nicht sehr weit mit meinem Handy der Text wird nämlich bei mir nich angezeigt...